Writers Helping Writers

Our group meets on the second and fourth Wednesdays of each month at the Sierra Vista Public Library. We give each other encouragement, share ideas, and learn the craft of writing together. Knowledgeable people sometimes give presentations on important topics, such as publishing versus self-publishing. There are times we do a round-table writing project: Each person has 5 minutes to start a story, then this is passed to the next person and continues until everyone has contributed to the story. Sometimes we are assigned a writing project to be read aloud and discussed at our next meeting.

July 23, 2025

Since our writing group has grown, we will now only write one short story (between 1,000 and 1,500 words) per month. Our assignment for July: Write a short story from an 8-year-old’s point of view. Here’s what I shared:

Special Birthday

“Mom, Becky’s dad is going to have a pitching clinic this fall. I wanna do it, and he’s only charging $40.” I watch her face as she thinks. Afraid she’ll say no, I blurt, “It can be part of my birthday present.”

At last she says, “I’ll think about it.” She flips over a blueberry pancake. “Please set the table.”

I get out plates and utensils, then grab the milk, butter, and maple syrup from the fridge. I fill a sippy cup with milk, then hand it to my two-and-a-half-year-old brother. “Do you want a glass of milk?”

She adds another pancake to a platter. “No, I’ll have coffee. Please get out the hazelnut creamer.” She shuts off the stove, then sets the platter on our kitchen table. Sitting down, she says, “Thank you, Lord, for what we are about to eat.” She forks pancakes onto plates for Jase, me, and herself. After she cuts my brother’s food into bite-sized chunks and puts the plate on his tray, she glances at me. “Is there anything else you want for your birthday?”

I was going to wait until my little brother was napping, but she seems to be in a good mood. I swallow another bite, then take a deep breath. “Well, this is my extra special birthday, Mom.”

She sips some coffee. “What do you mean?”

I take another bite of delicious pancake before I say, “I’ll be 8 on the eighth. That only happens once in a lifetime.” I see her nod and rush to say, “My friends say this one is super special because it’s also the eighth month.”

She glances at me. I can’t help squirming in my seat. This is so important to me. I put down my fork and take a deep breath. “Can I puleeze have a sleepover birthday party?”

Mom doesn’t answer right away. She gets up and dampens a wash cloth then wipes the stickiness from Jase’s face. She takes him from the highchair. Once he is standing on the floor, she flips the wall calendar up so she can see the month of August. “Hmm. Your birthday is on a Thursday. It would be better if it were the weekend.” She releases the calendar and starts clearing our breakfast things.

I put the items back in the fridge. “Pretty, pretty puleeze?”

She picks up Jase, carries him into the living room, and puts him in his playpen. She looks thoughtful as she returns. “We don’t have much room for a sleepover. How many girls?”

“Tracy, Becky, Liz, and Chrissie. Maybe Santina.”

Mom frowns then begins washing dishes. “The sofa bed won’t hold that many.”

I grab a dishtowel to dry. “We can use sleeping bags on the living room floor. That’s what we did at Tracy’s party.”

She rinses a plate, puts it in the rack, and washes another. I continue drying. I want to ask again but wait. Finished washing, she dries her hands and looks at me. “With 6 girls giggling most of the night, I won’t get much sleep. Guess I could schedule a vacation day for Friday.”

I hug her hard. “Oh boy! Thanks Mom! You’re the best!”

She smiles. “Would Domino’s pizza be good for your party?”

I grin. “Sure. Can I call my friends?”

Mom sighs. “No you cannot, but yes you may.”

Ugh! Why does she always correct my grammar? I wait until she leaves the kitchen, then grab the receiver from the kitchen wall phone. “‘Lo Becky.”

“Hey Tessa. Wassup?”

“Guess what!” I bounce on my feet. “I want you to come to my sleepover birthday party!”

“When?”

“Thursday, August 8th. My mom will order pizza, and we’ll have cake and ice cream too.”

“Hang on a sec.”

I twirl the long phone cord around my finger and listen as Becky asks her mom.

“She said okay.”

“Fantastic!” I dance around the kitchen. “Think I can convince my mom to rent a few videos. Maybe Hook, Curly Sue, and The Sandlot.”

“Have you seen The Addams Family yet?”

“Oh, that’d be a good one. Hope the store has it. Well girlfriend, I need to call the others. Talk laters.”

June 25, 2025

Homework for our first June meeting: Pick a landscape painting, then tell a fictional story of what happened on that landscape. I’ve linked the image below my short story. Here’s what I shared:

Landscape

It is a beautiful Friday afternoon as the man jogs along the boardwalk on the south side of Lake George. He slows his pace, thankful to be under the shade of the wooden canopy. He notices the ducks and swans afloat near the shoreline.

The jogger is amazed at the emptiness of the park. Even the lakefront gazebo is empty. He turns and glances back toward the clock tower. Almost 3:30. He does his cooldowns then heads to his car which he parked on Main Street. After a quick shower, he’ll be back here to help setup for the Hobart Jaycee’s June 1st festival at the other end of the lake.

Hobart South Shore poster

June 11, 2025

Homework for our first June meeting: Go to a public place and observe a person, or group of people, on the other side of the room (or from where you can’t hear them) and write their story. This is an exercise in reading people’s body language and non-verbal communication.

Here’s the short story that I shared:

Unknown Man

Tall and lanky, he grinned as he strode past me, raising a two-finger mini salute. I found his smile dazzling and infectious. I couldn’t help but answer in kind.

He was back again the next weekend, smiling that wide-mouth grin. Definitely a contagious kind of one. Charm emanated from him. I wondered if that grin had gotten him out of childhood trouble, or did it annoy his teachers?

This man appeared to be in his late twenties or early thirties. He walked with a military stride even as he pushed a cart filled with animal feed, smiling and saluting again as he left the store.

To my way of thinking, his grin and bearing seemed at odds. A scene of him saluting a drill sergeant flashed into my mind. He was trying to control his enormous grin, but failing.

The sergeant yelled, “Wipe that silly grin off your face. You look like a village idiot. Drop and give me twenty.” He glanced at the other squad members. “Don’t stand there smirking. Drop and give me twenty.”

Back in the barracks, he apologized. One comrade scoffed. “You forking moron. Always getting us in trouble. Can’t you do something to dim that megawatt grin of yours?”

His grin widened. “Sorry guys. Can’t help doing what comes naturally.”

The beefiest private approached and punched him in the gut. Laughing, he said, “Sorry. Had to do what comes naturally.”

May 28, 2025

I had to get a new computer, so please forgive my late posting. For our first meeting in March, my writers’ club asked us to write a short story about our first driving lesson. Here’s what I shared:

Kidnapped

Jane stared at the woman’s open palm, then looked up at her smiling face. She did not understand and turned to look back at the entrance. She should ask Mommy, who was sleeping, and Jane knew better than to wake her.

The stranger had unwrapped the square package and broke off a piece of something brown. “Open wide, sweetie. Like this.” The chunk disappeared behind her lips. “Yummy.”

Little Jane was ready when the lady tapped her chin. Opening wide, she almost bit a finger as she pulled the sweet into her mouth. Chocolate deliciousness exploded on her tongue as she devoured the rest of the Hershey bar.

“Oh, it’s all gone. But I have more in my car.” The woman reached out her hand. “Please come with me.”

Jane hesitated and looked toward the entrance, then shyly grasped the outstretched fingers. Within a few moments, they were next to a black cargo van. The rear door opened. Hairy, muscular arms lifted her inside. Jane opened her mouth to scream, but the woman put something like sour patch gummies on her tongue. She tried to keep her eyes open as she chewed, but the world grew dark.

She awoke in a soft bed, wearing a white flannel gown. Still groggy, she tried to see her surroundings. Though the room was dark, three other beds occupied the space. Jane tried to get up, but something weighed her down. Her thumb crept into her mouth. Suckling it, she fell asleep.

April 23, 2025

For our last writers’ group meeting, we were asked to write three opening hook paragraphs. Each hook was to be 300 words or less. Here’s what I composed and shared:

Hooks

Flom turned to the team. “Everyone please welcome our Genetic Engineering Nucleus Investigator. Her work is the best in the galaxy. We are fortunate to have her aboard.”

Geni waited for their polite greetings to end. “Thank you, Commander. I have reviewed the available core samples. I asked Gabriel to run his time-line simulator. Unfortunately, none of these will achieve the desired result.”

Flom glared at the participants until they were quiet, then he asked, “What? Why?”

“We must go back further in time than you originally anticipated.” Geni paused. “Sir, you are, and will remain, Fleet Lead Operations Manager, but I must take control of this situation.” She stared at him until he nodded. “Thank you.”

She stood and paced. “Gabriel and his simulator must accompany me down to the planet. It would be best to have another two with us. Whom do you suggest?”

He looked at the assembly. “Any volunteers?”

Ariel nodded. “I’m willing to assist.”

Michael said, “I’ve been down there before and willing to do it again.” He pressed a button on the control panel. A typography screen appeared. He pointed out an area. “The natives call this mountain Wachusett. The English settlements are viewable from this location. I suggest this be our base of operations.”

Geni sat down. “I am exhausted and need to recharge my energy. Let the four of us meet tomorrow at oh say 600 in my cabin.”

***

Jane tied her long blonde hair into a ponytail then added a second rubber band at the end. She whacked off the tail and draped it over logs in the fireplace. Entering the kitchen, she dyed her cropped hair black and towel dried it. She put the empty container and towel into her tote. Slipping on tennies, she led Oliver outside and leashed him in the backyard. Jane removed the shoes and placed those on the doormat. She added chocolate-chip granola bars and her oversized water bottle to her tote. She put on new moccasins and picked up the tote. The cardboard box was broken up and added to the logs before she lit a match, started a fire, then pulled a throw rug closer. She picked up her keys and shut the front door. Checking her watch, she realized Jim could be here shortly and hurriedly walked away.

***

Susan used a pillow to muffle her sobs. As a dutiful daughter, she didn’t want her parents to hear. Lord, you know I will do as Father asks. I just can’t help being appalled. Why did he choose such an older man for my husband? Why not a younger one?

Mother looked exhausted when she came upstairs to wake Susan the next morning. “I’ve started on your bridal gown. Your father will ask the reverend today to read the banns this Sunday. We’ve only three weeks to get you ready.”

“Thank you. How may I help?”

She looked at me as I rose from the bed. “What you’re wearing is almost threadbare, so you need to cut out and sew a new nightgown, kirtle, plus two smocks. Your father gave me enough money to purchase the necessary fabrics.” She sighed. “He didn’t want your clothing to be an embarrassment. He’s happy that he made such a fine match for you.”